[Writingworkshop] Nature submission

[Neale Morison]

Thanks Antony. I'll have a think about breaking up the long paragraph in 
the Mind and Body one. I can definitely add a double linefeed at each 
paragraph break at no extra cost.
The first person narrator is a dull and pedantic man, unfortunately, who 
has dedicated his career to interpreting an archaic transcript. I might 
have overdone it, though.
Thanks for your comments on the Alternatron. The bulk of Python humour 
was about consumer complaints, and I thought I'd milk it just a little more.
Don't get bummed out. I'm just writing while I can. When the voices in 
my head go quiet, or when an indifferent universe makes me work again 
I'll probably dry up, but I'm trying to get locked into a habit before 
that happens. Having comments from you guys has been a tremendous 
incentive to write. I really appreciate it.



Antony Nigel Donovan wrote:
> This was interesting, but the long paragraph in the middle made it hard
> for me to get through.  Also, clearer paragraph breaks would help.
>
> Unfortunately, format matters. ;-)
>
> Antony
>   

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