[Writingworkshop] And?
Neale Morison
neale at nealemorison.com
Mon Feb 9 04:27:42 EST 2009
Man, you know how to have fun. Trembling would be shaking Sappho's body
in delight. Looks like you and Daniel have both gone inspirational in
your distinct ways. I'm tempted to go and cycle over the Anzac Bridge in
100 degree heat. Wait, I just did that. That explains this puddle of
pain on the floor. But I didn't hit the critical point where it goes
recursive. Teach me, master.
Adam Holland wrote:
> my pain pours out
> of me drop
> by drop
> Falling, it stains.
> Rising, it rains
> Down.
> Enhances
> the soil in which
> I grow.
> Latent power, it fills.
> Permeates
> my roots, my foundations, my reasons
> Fills me.
> Imbues with.
> Trace elements of agony
> subtle algetic flavors
> Penetrate
> my being.
> Tested, I grow.
> Stronger
> and
> with strength, I seek.
> Strive
> Challenge
> Travail
> Tests
> Acts of will.
> Recursive, building, emergent, returning
> Self-defining.
> I choose.
> Pain.
>
> On Sun, Feb 8, 2009 at 8:31 PM, Neale Morison <nealemorison at gmail.com
> <mailto:nealemorison at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> Get thee to a nunnery.
>
> On Mon, Feb 9, 2009 at 12:29 PM, Daniel Peters
> <danieltpeters at gmail.com <mailto:danieltpeters at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> Thats really interesting that you caught a bit of onward
> christian soldiers....I sent that poem to a fellow poet with
> the subject line "it seems all my poems are coming out prayers"
>
>
> On Sun, Feb 8, 2009 at 10:23 AM, Adam Holland
> <adam.holland at gmail.com <mailto:adam.holland at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> I like this a lot
>
> "
> there is no way to find the way
> that finds the way you /want/ to be"
>
> the triple "way" is great, because it is confusing at
> first (slightly) but then the reader (me) realizes that
> this confusion is appropriate, because it's all really the
> Way, which of course invokes the implication that you
> can't find the way just by wanting it. Desire is not
> enough, and that explains the initial supposition the poem
> mentions. But of course, there is a way, and that is,
> again as the poem reveals, that the Way will find your way
> for you.
> In fact, it /is/ your way. In fact, there are the same,
> because ultimately there is only one Way, and finding your
> own is merely coming to this realization.
>
> On Sat, Feb 7, 2009 at 6:23 PM, Daniel Peters
> <danieltpeters at gmail.com <mailto:danieltpeters at gmail.com>>
> wrote:
>
> fuck. already see a fix.
>
>
> come with the thunder
> /from /under whatever /you're/ hiding
> where were you when
> who you were mattered
> only cause
> just because
> please don't suppose
> there is no way to find the way
> that finds the way you /want/ to be
>
> maybe. sticking over the "from"
>
>
>
> On Sat, Feb 7, 2009 at 6:15 PM, Daniel Peters
> <danieltpeters at gmail.com
> <mailto:danieltpeters at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> come with the thunder
> under whatever your hiding
> where were you when
> who you were mattered
> only cause
> just because
> please don't suppose
> there is no way to find the way
> that finds the way you need to be
>
>
> Love the K and R strunk and white reference. Solid.
>
> On Thu, Feb 5, 2009 at 4:57 AM, Neale Morison
> <neale at nealemorison.com
> <mailto:neale at nealemorison.com>> wrote:
>
> And?
> 2009-02-05
>
> Down and Dirty
> Day and Night
> Kernaghan and Ritchie
> Strunk and White
>
> Gone and Forgotten
> Today and Tomorrah
> Woodward and Bernstein
> Sodom and Gomorrah
>
> Crime and Punishment
> Form and Function
> Old and Grey
> Con and Junction
>
> Astaire and Rogers
> Shake and Shiver
> King and Country
> Stand and Deliver
>
> Belt and Braces
> Old and New
> Airs and Graces
> Me and You
>
>
> --
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