[Writingworkshop] Sestina - Night Vision

[Adam Holland]

really excellent.

This was my favorite

"Horizon free from angular design,"
This line was its own little work.
It evoked so much with so few words.

Well done.


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"...his cheeks seamed vertically in deep parentheses, as though it has been
his habit frequently to smile."


On Thu, Jan 14, 2010 at 11:09 PM, Neale Morison <neale at nealemorison.com>wrote:

> Hi all. Happy 2010.
> Here's my first attempt at a sestina.
> http://www.nealemorison.com/writing/poetry/index.html#nightvision
>
> A friend of mine mentioned Joe Haldeman's poem, Saul's Death, and I found
> it online and thought, hmm, it looks like you can do something with a
> sestina. Or with two, back to back, as Mr Haldeman demonstrates.
>
> http://www.writing-world.com/poetry/schimel4.shtml
>
>
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> Neale Morison
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